Find two things that are obviously similar or different. Then create an argument of similarity, difference, or degree. You may include a video clip or photos.
Horses and Zebras seem very similar due to their body shapes, sizes, and because they are in the same class. So just by looking at them, one may see a zebra as just a horse with black and white stripes but they are much more different than that. Zebras tend to make very different sounds than horses. They also have much smaller hooves and solid tails, unlike horses.
Horses and Zebras seem very similar due to their body shapes, sizes, and because they are in the same class. So just by looking at them, one may see a zebra as just a horse with black and white stripes but they are much more different than that. Zebras tend to make very different sounds than horses. They also have much smaller hooves and solid tails, unlike horses.
Grow- Go into more depth about their differences as well as their similarities.
ReplyDeleteGlow- Great example of animals that are very similar but different.
Glow: You used great, accurate evidence to support the difference between the two animals.
ReplyDeleteGrow: Transition the sentences more smoothly and end the paragraph not as abruptly.
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glow: good choice with what to compare
ReplyDeleteGrow: you showed the same amount of differences as similarities
Grade 12
ReplyDeleteGrow: Need more depth of the differences between them other than color and hoof size
ReplyDeleteGlow: Very good selection of comparison since both are very similar.
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